I have been doing some work on a new poetry project recently- a collaboration for Advent. Here is one that I do not think will make it into the final mix, as I am not sure about it. It is still in sketch form, and I am a bit worried about it being a bit too sentimentally ‘mystical’ rather than carrying some real honesty…
Starlight
To you whose hope
Seems stolen
Know this tender thing;
The bruised old sky above you
(Which seems to yawn indifference)
Is, in fact, leaking light.
Particles tumble down
Like this promise;
I am here
Where you are
For I know what you know
I see what you see
The fences you built are no protection
From starlight
My stars leave no shadow
Only the gentle light
Of becoming.
Just wanted to tell you how much I love this poem! I’ve kept the tab open on my phone so I can read it every now and again – often while feeding my new baby overnight while the stars are out!Thanks,Jen
Date: Sun, 15 Jun 2014 07:54:23 +0000 To: jen_gallivan@hotmail.co.uk
Thanks Jen- the thought of the poem being used in such a way makes me very happy! Perhaps it will make the cut after all…